View Full Version : A love poem I made

12-28-2005, 03:15 AM
I want to be your companion
and walk hand in hand,
your strength enveloping mine.
Autumn leaves falling,
scuffing feet and laughter,
sharing nights, not finished by the dark.

I want to be your confidant
as you pen your deepest
thoughts, as your heartaches
bleed and finally break free.
Your dreams, I keep as if my own.
I want to smile as you smile
and giggle with you
at nothing at all.

I want to be your lover
and find the passions
that move you to action.
I want to be the softness
that induces you to trust.
I want to be the naughty
that makes you come back for more.
I want to please you.

I want to share your breakfast
and your dinner,
I want you in the shower
and in your bed and
with soft steps to bring you coffee
(I take mine black)
Your strong arms, the legs
that power your thrust,
your lips of pleasure,
these are the fuel of my desire

no it is no secret, my love,
and to put it very simply,
I want you.

Any thoughts?

12-28-2005, 06:38 AM
Copycat :D

Thats a good poem, better than my 6-minute wonder.

12-28-2005, 06:42 AM
I think you need to get laid.

12-28-2005, 07:05 AM
I think you need to get laid.
Agreed, but remember trippy, subs aren't just for eating. Wishomie should know

12-28-2005, 07:12 AM
ZOMG you posted it everywhere, and you're so well known on the web... (http://www.google.fr/search?hl=fr&q=%22I+want+to+be+your+companion%22+%22and+walk+ha nd+in+hand%22&btnG=Rechercher&meta=)

12-28-2005, 07:19 AM
You're the best French person ever.

12-28-2005, 07:27 AM
Come on, you say that only because i made you a thread.
Let Trippy be the star of this one.

12-28-2005, 07:59 AM
This is so Lodat. Idiot.

12-28-2005, 08:17 AM
This is so Lodat. Idiot.

Just wait until I finish my Slovak love poem.

12-28-2005, 08:20 AM
You mean, until you finally google in on the poor Slovak internet?

12-28-2005, 08:24 AM
Whoa... you guys have INTERNET over there?

12-28-2005, 08:28 AM
Only when you creep close enough to the Austrian border and get wireless.

12-28-2005, 08:30 AM
You mean, until you finally google in on the poor Slovak internet?

No way, I'm making it special, just for you, all by myself. I'm putting a lot effort on it.

12-28-2005, 08:31 AM
All by yourself meaning with HAU's help, as usual.

12-28-2005, 08:33 AM
Ok, HAU might have something to do with it, but only on small level.

12-28-2005, 08:33 AM
But the thing is that the text is mine, HAU's only the translator here. It's just that everything sounds so great in Slovak, I love it, such a strong language.

12-28-2005, 08:34 AM
Pavol Orságh HAUslav. Oh man.

12-28-2005, 08:48 AM

I reckon that about sums up my feelings on the matter of a HAU poem.

12-28-2005, 10:12 AM
Pavol Orságh HAUslav. Oh man.
Oh ,that's gold.