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Trippy
12-28-2005, 03:15 AM
I want to be your companion
and walk hand in hand,
your strength enveloping mine.
Autumn leaves falling,
scuffing feet and laughter,
sharing nights, not finished by the dark.

I want to be your confidant
as you pen your deepest
thoughts, as your heartaches
bleed and finally break free.
Your dreams, I keep as if my own.
I want to smile as you smile
and giggle with you
at nothing at all.

I want to be your lover
and find the passions
that move you to action.
I want to be the softness
that induces you to trust.
I want to be the naughty
that makes you come back for more.
I want to please you.

I want to share your breakfast
and your dinner,
I want you in the shower
and in your bed and
with soft steps to bring you coffee
(I take mine black)
Your strong arms, the legs
that power your thrust,
your lips of pleasure,
these are the fuel of my desire

no it is no secret, my love,
and to put it very simply,
I want you.


Any thoughts?

Idiot
12-28-2005, 06:38 AM
Copycat :D

Thats a good poem, better than my 6-minute wonder.

Paint_It_Black
12-28-2005, 06:42 AM
I think you need to get laid.

notoriousdoc
12-28-2005, 07:05 AM
I think you need to get laid.
Agreed, but remember trippy, subs aren't just for eating. Wishomie should know

SkyRocker
12-28-2005, 07:12 AM
ZOMG you posted it everywhere, and you're so well known on the web... (http://www.google.fr/search?hl=fr&q=%22I+want+to+be+your+companion%22+%22and+walk+ha nd+in+hand%22&btnG=Rechercher&meta=)

Paint_It_Black
12-28-2005, 07:19 AM
You're the best French person ever.

SkyRocker
12-28-2005, 07:27 AM
Come on, you say that only because i made you a thread.
Let Trippy be the star of this one.

the_GoDdEsS
12-28-2005, 07:59 AM
This is so Lodat. Idiot.

Trippy
12-28-2005, 08:17 AM
This is so Lodat. Idiot.

Just wait until I finish my Slovak love poem.

the_GoDdEsS
12-28-2005, 08:20 AM
You mean, until you finally google in on the poor Slovak internet?

T-6005
12-28-2005, 08:24 AM
Whoa... you guys have INTERNET over there?

the_GoDdEsS
12-28-2005, 08:28 AM
Only when you creep close enough to the Austrian border and get wireless.

Trippy
12-28-2005, 08:30 AM
You mean, until you finally google in on the poor Slovak internet?

No way, I'm making it special, just for you, all by myself. I'm putting a lot effort on it.

the_GoDdEsS
12-28-2005, 08:31 AM
All by yourself meaning with HAU's help, as usual.

Trippy
12-28-2005, 08:33 AM
Ok, HAU might have something to do with it, but only on small level.

Trippy
12-28-2005, 08:33 AM
But the thing is that the text is mine, HAU's only the translator here. It's just that everything sounds so great in Slovak, I love it, such a strong language.

the_GoDdEsS
12-28-2005, 08:34 AM
Pavol Orságh HAUslav. Oh man.

T-6005
12-28-2005, 08:48 AM
Hmmmm......

I reckon that about sums up my feelings on the matter of a HAU poem.

HeadAroundU
12-28-2005, 10:12 AM
Pavol Orságh HAUslav. Oh man.
Oh ,that's gold.