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dain84
01-19-2006, 10:15 PM
It's made by a member of skateboard-city.com.

The Power of Words

It is amazing, the powers of the true spoken word
It can create more pain than a double-edged sword
People do not understand what power words can hold
Maybe these words should just go untold.
These words can shatter lives, disintegrate hope
These combinations of letters deny all ability to cope
These words told me you would always be here
They told me no matter what, you would always be near
Well, what has happened to those once sacred words?
Have they simply flown away, just like the birds?
I can't stand to think this may be the end,
But I'm afraid to say for what you have done, there may be no mend
Those cherished words which once came off your tongue
Have flown off like the birds and the songs they once sung.
In these final words I hope you may see
The wrongs you have commited me
Maybe through this one, last action
I can save another soul, and offer him satisfaction
Maybe you will one day see the true power of words
Because this time misfortune has gained the better of us, and it is back to the drawing boards.


The Promise

A promise is a promise, and a promise you shall keep
You promised my safety and this allowed me to sleep
You promised you'd be there when I needed you most
No matter where or when, coast to coast.

A promise is a powerful thing, you see
Its not a thing to be taken casually
I took your promise and locked it away in my heart
For I knew this promise and I, we would not part.

I would always be safe no matter where I went
Because I knew what this promise truly meant
But then came the night when I needed you most
But you refused to even come close.

You acted so different, you became so distant
I did not know what it all meant
This is when I became truly afraid
For fear I had last the promise you had made.


What do you guys think?

Mota Boy
01-19-2006, 10:17 PM
What do you guys think?
I think you should stop spamming. We're not going to magically start liking you again (OK, more realistically, magically start ignoring you again) just because you post dozens of new threads. It's getting pretty late for a school night, kiddo, you might want to start thinking of heading off to bed.

dain84
01-19-2006, 10:20 PM
I think you should stop spamming. We're not going to magically start liking you again (OK, more realistically, magically start ignoring you again) just because you post dozens of new threads. It's getting pretty late for a school night, kiddo, you might want to start thinking of heading off to bed.
I just think this stuff is awesome. Must you be such a fagfart?

Ps, I suffer from insomnia, so this is what I do at night. As a result, I look dead most of the time, but hey, that's what you get when you refuse to take sleep meds.

Rag Doll
01-19-2006, 10:21 PM
Seriously though, dain, try to limit the amount of topics you make per night. Thanks.

dain84
01-19-2006, 10:22 PM
Seriously though, dain, try to limit the amount of topics you make per night. Thanks.
It's not spamming, it's posting whatever I find that I think is worth posting.

Rag Doll
01-19-2006, 10:23 PM
Did I say *spamming* ANYWHERE in my reply? No. Save some for another night or something.

Andy
01-19-2006, 10:24 PM
this is what I do at night.
No it's not, you've been here for over a year and you haven't acted like this before.

And why do we have to suffer your insomnia as well? Perhaps if you weren't spending so much time making a nuisance of yourself you could get some kip.

Either way, be gone.

dain84
01-19-2006, 10:27 PM
Did I say *spamming* ANYWHERE in my reply? No. Save some for another night or something.
Oh, sorry I thought you did. Another member did though. Gimme a break, I haven't slept in 3 days.

dain84
01-19-2006, 10:28 PM
No it's not, you've been here for over a year and you haven't acted like this before.

And why do we have to suffer your insomnia as well? Perhaps if you weren't spending so much time making a nuisance of yourself you could get some kip.

Either way, be gone.
That's because I never posted in this forum before. i always used the other ones.

Andy
01-19-2006, 10:31 PM
That's because I never posted in this forum before. i always used the other ones.
And the time you do start posting in this forum you go down like a lead balloon. I say cut your losses and exit.

dain84
01-19-2006, 10:34 PM
All you guys do is change the subject and ignore the thread. Same for sb-c but they can do it with some humor.

Andy
01-19-2006, 10:36 PM
All you guys do is change the subject and ignore the thread. Same for sb-c but they can do it with some humor.
Which again brings up the suggestion that you should bugger off back to sb-c as it's so magnificently better than here.

JohnnyNemesis
01-19-2006, 11:15 PM
Gimme a break

No.

And why won't you shut up about your other forum? Everyone seems to hate you there the same way no one likes you here, but since they manage to hate you so much better, go bother them instead. No one cares about your shitty poetry find, your loser friends, or your "humorous" Internet finds.

arak0r
01-19-2006, 11:17 PM
chances are he'll claim the work as his own someplace.

Sin Studly
01-19-2006, 11:17 PM
"This message is hidden because dain84 is on your ignore list."

This works.

JohnnyNemesis
01-19-2006, 11:23 PM
Justin, you might want to check out Jebus' "dain84 is the new LODAT" thread though. You, you especially might find it interesting.

Andy
01-19-2006, 11:36 PM
True, some of the claims made my Dain were mighty fascinating.

Paint_It_Black
01-20-2006, 01:56 AM
It's made by a member of skateboard-city.com.


Don't worry, we would have assumed you didn't write it.

dain84
01-20-2006, 07:09 AM
No.

And why won't you shut up about your other forum? Everyone seems to hate you there the same way no one likes you here, but since they manage to hate you so much better, go bother them instead. No one cares about your shitty poetry find, your loser friends, or your "humorous" Internet finds.
Actually, a large majority of the n00bs worship me when I pwn one of them.

Paint_It_Black
01-20-2006, 07:18 AM
Give us a link to some of these magnificent pwns then.

Little_Miss_1565
01-20-2006, 08:44 AM
Actually, a large majority of the n00bs worship me when I pwn one of them.

But the non-noobs don't seem to like you much.

Says a senior member at sb-c: "1. You're arguing with dain84, so winning doesn't give you any credit anyways."

JoY
01-20-2006, 08:50 AM
dain sucks.

*walks off*