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Lightning Rod
11-20-2006, 09:36 AM

11-20-2006, 10:17 AM
...Is this serious?

That was really bad, and I hate to say this because I like you. I'm just going to discuss what I thought was the biggest problem in this song: The fact that it sounds like every member of the band was playing different songs, in completely different keys.

Well, the drumming was good, as well as the main guitar riff.

11-23-2006, 10:07 AM
really bad, yeah I guess the drumming is not bad but anyway the reccording is bad too

Lightning Rod
12-13-2006, 01:01 PM

12-13-2006, 07:08 PM
That was awful, for reasons randman pointed out.

Normally I feel guilty about insulting someones band, and if I don't like it I just won't reply. But I don't like you. So you get honesty.

12-14-2006, 01:43 AM
Since others can't seem to bother, *cough cough*, I'll try to be specific and constructive, though in this case I wonder if my words will be listened to at all.

Either way. I normally don't listen to anything anyone posts on this forum because I haven't got the time to listen to everyone's stuff so I figure it'd be rude to be totally selective. But this one I got curious with since everybody was calling this stuff shit. So I gave it a listen.

Which I now sort of regret. But okay, to talk about specific problems...

- I think the first thing you should do is invest in some better recording stuff. The sound quality is not too awesome and that coupled with the noisy punkrock you play, it just hurts my ears.

- Punk doesn't have to be noisy screaming. There was hardly a riff or two in there. Punk can also have melodies or if you want to go hardcore, listen to some good hardcore and take lessons from that.

- I can't make sense of the lyrics but they don't seem too bright, either. Vocalist's voice seems odd, tampered with, which I suppose is okay but at times it's okay and other times it's awful.

Still, I try to be encouraging so... Keep striving for betterness - greatness may be out of reach for the time being.

Lightning Rod
12-18-2006, 08:55 AM

Lightning Rod
12-26-2006, 05:13 AM

12-28-2006, 07:54 AM
I didn't listen the song, but the page is absolutely AWESOME. Great design. Did you do it by yourself? I'm jealous. I want a page like yours.

Lightning Rod
12-28-2006, 08:29 AM
yes that my idea and design too....thanks

01-07-2007, 09:03 AM

01-07-2007, 10:08 AM
I don't know what i should say.....just say something about my band song...it's demo...called Cuts..........

Give us a link.

01-07-2007, 10:10 AM
Give us a link.

He did, but he took it out 'cause he sucked.

01-07-2007, 10:16 AM
He did, but he took it out 'cause he sucked.

Really? I kinda wanted to hear it anyways. If he had kept it in there then someone could've given him some good advice on how to improve it.

The Deceptionist
01-07-2007, 03:59 PM
Check Out......

wtf?? what was that!?

01-07-2007, 04:03 PM
I thought it sounded rather raw & staticy. Unclear, too. Keep working on it. I'm sure you'll do good soon enough.

01-08-2007, 12:54 PM
yes that my idea and design too....thanks
WOW. I admire you.

01-09-2007, 10:41 AM
wtf?? what was that!?

That was 10000000000x better than the first one.

The Deceptionist
01-09-2007, 01:12 PM
That was 10000000000x better than the first one.

damn. now i really want to hear the first one!! i spent ages on that page trying to find it as well. dude put it back up!!

The Deceptionist
01-09-2007, 02:02 PM
that is a pretty nifty looking site... but - theres not really much keeping me from closing the window and.. oh - its gone

01-23-2007, 10:05 AM
Lightning rod

Are you gonna upload more singles??

01-23-2007, 12:31 PM
WOW. I admire you.

maybe he should start making sites then & quit playing music?

no idea, the link is gone, so I didn't have a chance to listen to it. the comments pretty much speak for themselves, though.

01-23-2007, 02:38 PM
Hey man, practice a lot, the more you do it, the better you will get.