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Rilex
01-05-2007, 05:55 PM
Yea, this is longest time that I work on one song,
But you will realize that it’s not pointless...

http://www.esnips.com/doc/735c3232-014f-419f-b87a-26aa2539ad21/Vintage_The_Bewitches_Wait_Forever

In the new page, use “download file” link …

Rilex
01-08-2007, 09:05 PM
Fuck You If This Song Isnít Good>>>

SkunkIt
01-08-2007, 09:18 PM
Somehow, I think that song would work good in a video game introduction.

Rilex
01-08-2007, 10:08 PM
What style of game?

RickyCrack
01-08-2007, 10:53 PM
A really gay game that nobody plays.

SkunkIt
01-08-2007, 11:09 PM
Honestly, a new Sonic The Hedgehog game or an old racing game.

It wasn't too bad, but your music composition could definitely use alot of work. It was repetitive and the end sounded like it was cut off. There wasn't really anything special to it. I hate to sound like a bitch, but if people tell you this song was pretty good, you'd keep going in the same general direction instead of trying to improve your songs. I didn't mind the monotone at all, but the song was too generic and repetitive. you need to fit something different in there to make it more interesting.

Again, I don't mean to sound like a bitch and I know it took you almost a year to come up with this song, but if people just kept telling one another everything sounded good, people wouldn't try to improve, go audition on American Idol and blame Simon for telling them the truth, if you know what I mean. White lies do hurt more than the truth, because they make you find out the truth the hard way.

Rilex
01-16-2007, 05:15 PM
I would say only two words: FUCK OFF!!! :rolleyes:

Vera
01-17-2007, 01:42 AM
Hey, if you can't take constructive criticism, don't post stuff online.

Chachi1856
01-17-2007, 02:46 AM
A really gay game that nobody plays.

HAHAHAHA:D true. Dude you need work. Sounds like the intro to a cheesy NES game or some shit

T-6005
01-17-2007, 10:13 AM
A year? Don't get me wrong, I don't think it's bad (although it is rather jerky and slightly repetitive), but it took you a year to make this?

Dr. Shadow
01-17-2007, 03:37 PM
I really like the sound and it, and it sounds pretty good, but I just think it sounds repetetive. Maybe you should try adding in some more instruments in more places to keep it interesting.