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SmashMyBadHabit
02-17-2008, 09:10 PM
I have 3 shorts here on youtube. Please keep in mind that each one isn't supposed to be taken seriouly in the least. All in good fun. I made each one in a day (when I get board, I make shorts). Any feedback would be great. Thanks for taking the time to check them out! If you like Subscribe

Blow Up Dolls From Mars!
http://youtube.com/watch?v=xbTAOsYYh-I

Space Encounter From Dimension X...
http://youtube.com/watch?v=T3k-jP7rF1I

Sean Vs. The Lawn
http://youtube.com/watch?v=jCQID8PI5TM

Wolfbutter
02-17-2008, 09:36 PM
The first one is great. It is interesting and kept my involved all the way through. And the end was funny and unexpected.

The second was just weird. No dialougue, no idea what's really going on, and it's pretty boring. It just made me go WTF.

The third was also pretty boring. No dialougue, and the first couple of minutes didn't really build up to anything.

You are obviously a very talented camera guy and editor. I just think you need to work a bit on your writing, keep it entertaining and involve the watcher. Good luck.

SmashMyBadHabit
02-17-2008, 10:42 PM
Thanks man, some great feedback!

HornyPope
02-18-2008, 02:17 AM
I loved how sincere the characters were in the first video.

The 2nd video was great camera work. Good job putting it together.

The third was the best-all-around. Good story and good production.


Just my way of describing my opinion.


Edit: LOVE the signature, but what the hell is it supposed to mean? I'm more than intrigued...

H1T_That
02-18-2008, 09:59 AM
Some great camera and editing work there.

The first one is awesome.

Cock Joke
02-18-2008, 04:51 PM
Number 2's still loading, but I saw the first one and the ending was just fuckin' hilarious! Good job!

EDIT: Two was sweet! Laser shooting titties FTW!

3 was awright. Not as good as 1 & 2, but still cool.

Devconn88
02-18-2008, 05:01 PM
the first one is amazing. the 2nd had pretty girls, and the 3 i got bored.

Harnum
02-18-2008, 05:18 PM
Pretty cool man. I like the first one and the last one. I'm not sure what's going on in the second one, but it is well produced, so kudos on that.

P.S - I loved the alien noise every time the doll would show up! Classy! Also, I loved these particular lines. "Lucy! What are you doing here? Why didn't you just knock? What a whore... let's fuck her!" lawlz

SmashMyBadHabit
02-18-2008, 10:18 PM
Thanks a lot guys! Both negative and positive feedback is great. I will be posting a new video each week (wether it's a short or response) so be sure to subscribe if you like my stuff.

Every week = new video!

Thanks for the support.

Drafan
02-19-2008, 09:42 AM
Man, I hate lawn. We have got a steep slope in our garden, pretty hard to mow. See videos from Grickle on youtube, that is a way.

Jebus
02-19-2008, 05:10 PM
Space Encounter From Dimension X...
http://youtube.com/watch?v=T3k-jP7rF1I

Laser Nipples

YES

SmashMyBadHabit
03-06-2008, 12:48 PM
Artsy Art is now up!