View Full Version : Some shorts I made (no longer then 4 mins)

02-17-2008, 08:10 PM
I have 3 shorts here on youtube. Please keep in mind that each one isn't supposed to be taken seriouly in the least. All in good fun. I made each one in a day (when I get board, I make shorts). Any feedback would be great. Thanks for taking the time to check them out! If you like Subscribe

Blow Up Dolls From Mars!

Space Encounter From Dimension X...

Sean Vs. The Lawn

02-17-2008, 08:36 PM
The first one is great. It is interesting and kept my involved all the way through. And the end was funny and unexpected.

The second was just weird. No dialougue, no idea what's really going on, and it's pretty boring. It just made me go WTF.

The third was also pretty boring. No dialougue, and the first couple of minutes didn't really build up to anything.

You are obviously a very talented camera guy and editor. I just think you need to work a bit on your writing, keep it entertaining and involve the watcher. Good luck.

02-17-2008, 09:42 PM
Thanks man, some great feedback!

02-18-2008, 01:17 AM
I loved how sincere the characters were in the first video.

The 2nd video was great camera work. Good job putting it together.

The third was the best-all-around. Good story and good production.

Just my way of describing my opinion.

Edit: LOVE the signature, but what the hell is it supposed to mean? I'm more than intrigued...

02-18-2008, 08:59 AM
Some great camera and editing work there.

The first one is awesome.

Cock Joke
02-18-2008, 03:51 PM
Number 2's still loading, but I saw the first one and the ending was just fuckin' hilarious! Good job!

EDIT: Two was sweet! Laser shooting titties FTW!

3 was awright. Not as good as 1 & 2, but still cool.

02-18-2008, 04:01 PM
the first one is amazing. the 2nd had pretty girls, and the 3 i got bored.

02-18-2008, 04:18 PM
Pretty cool man. I like the first one and the last one. I'm not sure what's going on in the second one, but it is well produced, so kudos on that.

P.S - I loved the alien noise every time the doll would show up! Classy! Also, I loved these particular lines. "Lucy! What are you doing here? Why didn't you just knock? What a whore... let's fuck her!" lawlz

02-18-2008, 09:18 PM
Thanks a lot guys! Both negative and positive feedback is great. I will be posting a new video each week (wether it's a short or response) so be sure to subscribe if you like my stuff.

Every week = new video!

Thanks for the support.

02-19-2008, 08:42 AM
Man, I hate lawn. We have got a steep slope in our garden, pretty hard to mow. See videos from Grickle on youtube, that is a way.

02-19-2008, 04:10 PM
Space Encounter From Dimension X...

Laser Nipples


03-06-2008, 11:48 AM
Artsy Art is now up!