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Outerspaceman21
01-31-2009, 12:58 AM
Hey, I got my own music myspace where I post guitar riffs and lyrics that I wrote. I hope to start a band, but thats in the near future. I just want to hear some feedback from other people. What would you think I need to work on, you know?

http://myspace.com/thenoose0621

Thanks in advance.

Free?
01-31-2009, 04:08 AM
Hehe, for how long do you play guitar?
Also, I feel that you should get Davey Havok to do vocals for Against All Reason.
And a certain song has a definite Dirty Magic vibe fo sho :).

Outerspaceman21
01-31-2009, 11:25 AM
Hehe, for how long do you play guitar?
Also, I feel that you should get Davey Havok to do vocals for Against All Reason.
And a certain song has a definite Dirty Magic vibe fo sho :).

I would guess that song is Sweet Dreams. Yeah, I have no idea what was going through my mind when I wrote.

I've been playing seriously for about a year. I've got power chords down pretty well, and I am working on Ska/reggae stuff and soloing.

Outerspaceman21
02-02-2009, 08:18 PM
Hey, I posted some new stuff. I used a different method of recording. In the previous riffs, I had some of my strumming bleeding into the mike, so I fixed that by hanging the mike around my guitar stand and putting in front of my amp a few feet away.

Also, I changed my strings. Went from SIT string to Ernie Ball, so it my sounds different in areas.

Outerspaceman21
04-05-2009, 07:03 PM
Hey, just posted some new stuff on my music myspace. No Tomorrow, The Cavalry, and Saint Mary are stuff I've been working on for a while. Check it out and leave a comment. I like other's opinions.

And hey, add me if you'd like.

AllIn All It's Not So Bad
04-12-2009, 12:41 PM
i hate the intro on hail mary but i LOVE the rest
like free said it has a dirty magic vide to it and it's this part
e||-----------------------------------------------------------|
B||-----------------------------------------------------------|
G||--7\9--9-9\7\9--9-9---------------------------------------
D||--7\9--9-9\7\9--9-9---555\-777---------------------------------
A||--5\7--7-7\5\7--7-7---555\-777---------------------------------
E||-----------------------333\-555-------------------------------
i like the other stuf too

Outerspaceman21
04-12-2009, 12:55 PM
Yeah, that Offspring early stuff is a big inspiration on me musically.

Really, you didn't like the intro to Saint Mary. A lot of people like it. I've received lots of praise for it.

And that song is called Sweet Dreams. I wrote lyrics to it and I'm still trying to figure out how it's going to work.

AllIn All It's Not So Bad
04-12-2009, 01:40 PM
yeah i didnt like it
i love the rest of hail mary specialy the scratches
i would love to hear more of sweet dreams. and also the finished version of it

Outerspaceman21
04-12-2009, 01:45 PM
It wont happen until I get new, 150 watt amp, a bass player and a drummer.

Right now, I need a job. None of the stuff I want to happen wont happen until I get a steady income.

AllIn All It's Not So Bad
04-12-2009, 06:08 PM
maybe sell ur things or ask for donations

Outerspaceman21
04-12-2009, 06:49 PM
I would never ask for a donation. I would sell some of my things, though. I got a lot of useless stuff.

Outerspaceman21
07-14-2009, 05:20 PM
Hey, I posted some new stuff. It's not the greatest thing I've done, but it's something productive. Give it a listen, please. It's called "Corruption"