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The Goth Guy
03-29-2005, 04:14 PM
As we dance in a circle of athousand black roses,I look into my dark heart and see my exscuse for a life that I am,but then I look into your eyes and for a second I feel love,for as when we die away,we shall dance forever in each others arms in the black roses,my dark lover girl.

this is for my gf Jade,yeah im a romantic goth,dont like it fuck off

Noodles is gay
03-29-2005, 04:25 PM
I've seen better, i'm afraid - although it's not that bad (don't kill yourself over that ;))


Cruelty has a human heart,
and Jealousy a human face;
Terror the human form divine,
and Secrecy the human dress.

The human dress is forged iron,
the human form a firey forge,
the human face a furnace sealed,
the human heart its hungry gorge.

Beautiful.

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 05:09 PM
Huh? I don't care who it's for. I feel sorry for whoever it is for. Man, dark poetry is so samey. Grah. Alfred Lord Tenneson, I'm embarassed for you.

turb0negr0
03-29-2005, 05:14 PM
...dont like it, fuck off


Okay...

*fucks off*

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 05:15 PM
Dude, let's like, die together in a bed of black roses.

Or, yknow, whatever.

Noodles is gay
03-29-2005, 05:22 PM
Alfred Lord Tenneson, I'm embarassed for you.

Alfred Lord Tennyson is amazing! They don't even have him in my school library! :eek: Idiots.


NB. the poem i posted was by William Blake. ;)

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 05:23 PM
Your school library knows fuck all about fuck all.

Yes, I'm so mad, I'm using double negatives.

Noodles is gay
03-29-2005, 05:27 PM
I quite agree - one book by William Blake! Nothing by Lord Byron! :eek:

They suck; i wrote them a list of books to get and they actually got some which was rather nice though.

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 05:41 PM
Any of the war poets? Sassoon, etc?

Noodles is gay
03-29-2005, 05:43 PM
Happily yes; there are a couple of anthologies of war poems but i don't think that they have any complete collections of particular poets.

You like Sassoon too? The guy's awesome; so sarcastic and ironic!

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 05:45 PM
Hmm. Not sure if "like" is the right word.. more respect. Though his style isn't to my taste.

ninth
03-29-2005, 06:03 PM
Dark Poetry 101:

Sad abymsal sadness
No more new sock feeling
Hole in my sole
HOLE IN MY SOUL!
SEOUL!
Blood and pain
Acid reflux
Tu-tu-tu-tu-TUMS!
63 bracelets
Hide cuts
Prime cuts
Sides of beef
Fatty deposits in my arms
Dark dark corner of my parent's basement
I pretend to be a vampire
SPOOKY!

I am such a tortured artist, woe is me!

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 06:05 PM
You forgot the goth chick and black roses. And dying.

Good first try, though.

The Goth Guy
03-29-2005, 06:09 PM
try this on ninth

Love
Fuck
Fight
Bleed
Die
What I wanna do get in my game or fuck you
Live
See
Kill
Free
Die or lie in a pool of blood you stupid fuck
Kill me with my own soul
Heaven
Hell
Days
Nights
Get back in your fuckin cage you smell -middle finger-

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 06:11 PM
try this on ninth

Love
Fuck
Fight
Bleed
Die
What I wanna do get in my game or fuck you
Live
See
Kill
Free
Die or lie in a pool of blood you stupid fuck
Kill me with my own soul
Heaven
Hell
Days
Nights
Get back in your fuckin cage you smell -middle finger-

Strangest comeback I've ever heard. Mind you, that's pre-teen goths for you.

Noodles is gay
03-29-2005, 06:12 PM
Both you guys left out SUICIDE!!! :eek:

Endymion
03-29-2005, 06:13 PM
psh, jenny should be on msn.

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 06:13 PM
Well, they didn't want to get all morbid or anything.

The Goth Guy
03-29-2005, 06:18 PM
ok first off im 19,not a fuckin teenager,and yeah I do sometimes think of stuff that makes no sense like:"Life is like a ho it fucks you over and over again until your left with STD's and no money"

TheUnholyNightbringer
03-29-2005, 06:19 PM
How original.

And by the way, I didn't say teen, I said pre-teen.

And by the way, you are still a teen. You're nineTEEN. Clue is at the end.

sk8ter-hater
03-29-2005, 06:58 PM
I prefer crazy, mad poit of views, take a look at this.
"TRUE! nervous, very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am; but why WILL you say that I am mad? The disease had sharpened my senses, not destroyed, not dulled them. Above all was the sense of hearing acute. I heard all things in the heaven and in the earth. I heard many things in hell. How then am I mad? Hearken! and observe how healthily, how calmly, I can tell you the whole story."

TrippingOut
03-30-2005, 08:14 AM
As we dance in a circle of athousand black roses,I look into my dark heart and see my exscuse for a life that I am,but then I look into your eyes and for a second I feel love,for as when we die away,we shall dance forever in each others arms in the black roses,my dark lover girl.


i like it.

TrippingOut
03-30-2005, 08:26 AM
cutting is a rather uncomfortable topic for me as my old best friend ( a goth) slit her wrists with a piece of glass in a desperate attempt to kill herself.
they found her just in time. but i haven't seen her for two years.

JoY
03-30-2005, 02:02 PM
I once wrote something, that you could possibly describe as dark poetry. I do know I wrote them in pretty damn dark times. when I look back on that one 'poem' now, it amazes me how scared, confused, pathetic & teeny I really was. & still sometimes the same feeling I had then surprises me, grabs me & tends to drag me down. things are different now, though. I don't have an as good 'excuse' to feel that way now as I had then, which confuses me.

I'm babbling & rambling again. shoot meh.

Sweet bitter, bittersweet
The taste of your memories
Making your eyes cold as concrete
Being your eternal disease
That no medication can cure or heal
Slowly consuming you from the inside
That the outside can conceal
Until together they will collide

You tried to wash away the stain
But you rubbed it in too deep
You tried to softly kill the pain
But it killed you in your sleep
And all that is left now
Is the skin you inhabited
You tried to stop it somehow
But the bleeding stopped instead

You know that little part of you
Is now forever dead

The Goth Guy
03-31-2005, 01:53 PM
Cutting deep in my soul I find a hole that was never known before
A secret hole that is the reason for my whole fucking life,slit wrists,sex,drugs
It all does nothing but kill,my empty soul I cannot fill
And as I lay in this pool of blood,my life flashes by,why the fuck am I the one to die?
Then I think of everything that was lost before
Pain and anguish at my broken door
Time is everything in this life
Now is your time to die.....

these are my words of rampage

ninth
03-31-2005, 07:19 PM
cutting is a rather uncomfortable topic for me as my old best friend ( a goth) slit her wrists with a piece of glass in a desperate attempt to kill herself.
they found her just in time. but i haven't seen her for two years.
Hopefully she's dead now. Failing at suicide has got to be the lamest thing ever because it not only means that you suck at life but also at death. People that fail at suicide should be put down as mercy killings.

SkunkIt
03-31-2005, 07:43 PM
As we dance in a circle of athousand black roses,I look into my dark heart and see my exscuse for a life that I am,but then I look into your eyes and for a second I feel love,for as when we die away,we shall dance forever in each others arms in the black roses,my dark lover girl.

this is for my gf Jade,yeah im a romantic goth,dont like it fuck offThat poem made me laugh! :D

The Goth Guy
03-31-2005, 07:47 PM
Nice to know.

Sin Studly
09-04-2005, 02:31 AM
Empty, shackled, meaningless
My existance, why bother?
Pain shreds through my emaciated body
Alone, insane, afraid
The blade is sharp
The flesh is soft
That the metal doesn't yield
My tender body does
Or would
I can only make reddish sort of marks
It hurts when I cut and I stop
But I really need some angsty depressing scars to get back at my parents for making me clean my room

~*hit_that*~
09-04-2005, 04:42 AM
Empty, shackled, meaningless
My existance, why bother?
Pain shreds through my emaciated body
Alone, insane, afraid
The blade is sharp
The flesh is soft
That the metal doesn't yield
My tender body does
Or would
I can only make reddish sort of marks
It hurts when I cut and I stop
But I really need some angsty depressing scars to get back at my parents for making me clean my room

Nice :confused:

Sin Studly
09-04-2005, 04:47 AM
...... dammit Leela.... just....

*sighs*

the_GoDdEsS
09-04-2005, 04:48 AM
Nice :confused:

Ermm. What did you mean?

~*hit_that*~
09-04-2005, 04:56 AM
sarcasm

*damn the fuckin 10 letter rule :mad: *

the_GoDdEsS
09-04-2005, 05:00 AM
You should stop using smileys then because they make your posts sound totally confusing.

~*hit_that*~
09-04-2005, 05:13 AM
You should stop using smileys then because they make your posts sound totally confusing.

sorry, I shall do that

Sin Studly
09-04-2005, 05:38 AM
This pains me, but I think she only means she was being sarcastic about the "nice" part, meaning she doesn't think my poem is very good.

~*hit_that*~
09-04-2005, 05:41 AM
This pains me, but I think she only means she was being sarcastic about the "nice" part, meaning she doesn't think my poem is very good.

Justin, it sounds more of a piss take than anything. Ridiculing those poems by 'silly crybaby emo people' who write about cutting themselves and wanting to commit suicide etc.

Sin Studly
09-04-2005, 06:12 AM
Oh, then you did understand it.

~*hit_that*~
09-05-2005, 04:39 PM
Oh, then you did understand it.

Yes :)

(10 letars)

The Darkside Has Cookies
09-05-2005, 04:41 PM
letars



Hahahahahahahahahahaha

~*hit_that*~
09-05-2005, 04:42 PM
Hahahahahahahahahahaha

What's so funny about that?

The Darkside Has Cookies
09-05-2005, 04:43 PM
You can't spell worth shit.

~*hit_that*~
09-05-2005, 04:46 PM
You can't spell worth shit.

I intended to spell it that way. I know it is spelt 'letters'. But i felt like saying it like "lettarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrs", really emphasising the 'R'. Like I have done before.