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DirtyMagical
04-05-2005, 05:57 AM
... it just rhymes... a bit.


Confusion is prevailing
And logic's getting blurred
Of course this was expected
I knew that I'd get burned

I never thought that people
Would really give a fuck
And even though I know it now
I'm still: Shit outta luck!

Or maybe I am lucky
I guess it could be worse
Should get my shit together
Though, every muscle hurts

And maybe when I wake up
My mind will clear again
Could use some relaxation
But, damn, shit hit the fan!


grrr!

crazy_offspring_gal
04-05-2005, 06:00 AM
hay thats quit good, whats it about? LOL if its not a poem then what is it?

DirtyMagical
04-05-2005, 06:07 AM
Expression of overwhelming emotions in a rhyming uhh.... way? =/

errr. it's about: doing something, that had to be done, and still feeling really fucking guilty about it... attempting to get rid of the guilt by doing something that will only fuck shit up even more in the end... and generally being fucking confused about what's gonna happen...

doesnt clear anything up, does it? heh.. =/

crazy_offspring_gal
04-05-2005, 06:12 AM
im even more confused now LOL

DirtyMagical
04-05-2005, 06:14 AM
sorry... i don't make much sense to myself either... at the moment..
now I gotta go and attempt to get on the bus with no money/tickets whatsoever...
boo!

Hysteria
04-05-2005, 06:47 AM
Its a poem!

crazy_offspring_gal
04-05-2005, 06:56 AM
its a rhyme!!! lol

JohnnyNemesis
04-05-2005, 07:54 AM
... it just rhymes... a bit.

Confusion is prevailing
And logic's getting blurred
Of course this was expected
I knew that I'd get burned

I never thought that people
Would really give a fuck
And even though I know it now
I'm still: Shit outta luck!

Or maybe I am lucky
I guess it could be worse
Should get my shit together
Though, every muscle hurts

And maybe when I wake up
My mind will clear again
Could use some relaxation
But, damn, shit hit the fan!


grrr!

I love you, Ms. DirtyMagical. *swoon*

Seriously, I can relate, and that was a good read. I really am swooning.

JoY
04-05-2005, 08:04 AM
I recognise the feeling. very familliar.
nicely expressed & a smile to your appropriate use of language.