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04-08-2005, 04:18 PM
A taste of my heart for your viewing pleasure

In Runes(Saturn)
I loved everything about you...
everything you never thought about is
what I found to be the most
your face in the moonlight,
the smile that you have...
God, I miss holding you...
no infatuation, just love...
I long for your touch...
I long to sleep, but I know I can`t
escape you,
even in slumber...
we have no ability to change
the past...
but i can wish

I feel consumed
by the feeling that I am all alone here
that every aching bone of my being
is isolated
as though my heart
(which is so sacred)
has been shattered
against the bathroom mirror
and was allowed to fall
against the solid floor
as I viciously gasp for air
what I need to comfort me always
comfort-that which is so dear to me
the thing of which I am so deprived of
the fact that I was hurt
so violently
is a thing I can never
recover from
I desire a sense of protection
not from him
but from myself as well
I don`t ever want to be barred
and left defendeless ever again

All The Words I Cannot Say
I long to say all the things
that I have kept inside
to spill them like tears
(those I do not fear)
but my own voice is so foreign to me
and my words gather carefully
in the back of my throat
because I dare not release them
afraid I might displease you
that te sentances that have collected
may cut you like tiny knives
the emotions in my veins lashing out suddenly
as if I cannot control them
for so long they have controlled me
and I am so used to being at their mercy
that I keep my mouth shut
though my tongue is fighting back

04-08-2005, 04:32 PM
roses are red
violets are blue
(insert line 3 here)
(insert line 4 here)

04-08-2005, 04:36 PM
if he breaks your heart
you should be entitled to sue

how is that for ya

Noodles is gay
04-08-2005, 05:40 PM
ooh ooh! chance to post poetry; how could i resist! :D


Youth of delight! come hither
And see the opening morn,
Image of Truth new-born.
Doubt is fled, and clouds of reason,
Dark disputes and artful teazing.
Folly is an endless maze;
Tangled roots perplex her ways;
How many have fallen there!
They stumble all night over bones of the dead;
And feel--they know not what but care;
And wish to lead others, when they should be led.

04-08-2005, 05:42 PM
It's just awesome.......... I knew there were some sensitive( THANK YOU LINDA) people around here............... :rolleyes:

*Spreads some love* <3 :D

Noodles is gay
04-08-2005, 05:46 PM
^ Most poetry is awesome!

Alfred, Lord Tennyson - THE FLOWER.

Once in a golden hour
I cast to earth a seed.
Up there came a flower,
The people said, a weed.

To and fro they went
Thro' my garden-bower,
And muttering discontent
Cursed me and my flower.

Then it grew so tall
It wore a crown of light,
But thieves from o'er the wall
Stole the seed by night.

Sow'd it far and wide
By every town and tower,
Till all the people cried
`Splendid is the flower.'

Read my little fable:
He that runs may read.
Most can raise the flowers now,
For all have got the seed.

And some are pretty enough,
And some are poor indeed;
And now again the people
Call it but a weed.

The Goth Guy
04-08-2005, 07:01 PM
Simple minds and simple souls
Why must we die of pain and heartache
Why must we clean up messes others make
When leaves of orange fall
I'll take you to your royal ball
We'll dance and dance the night away
Until our hearts are drowsy and frey
And if our love shall ever stop
Then my life will I take
Dance Dance the night away
Lost souls of ours we will
We burn our torches out of range
And alas we lose our pain.--Marcus W (me)

The Goth Guy
04-08-2005, 07:22 PM
Hey there TripBoy!

04-08-2005, 08:45 PM
Their spirits soar
as they watch the blood pour.
The deceptive promise
now only a faint glow in the darkness.
Dancing like a flame,
drowning in the pain.
Regret for nothing
because now it's all numbing.
These lost souls now gather,
causing innocent hearts to shatter,
to drain the color from the living
and bring forgiveness to the unforgiving.
Trapped minds are freed
and the immortal questions bleed.
The answers drip and disentigrate
forever lost in this world of hate.
When all has been consumed,
shining light from the moon
will rule the earth
and bring our rebirth.

04-08-2005, 08:47 PM
Goth poem time!

My meaningless life has come to an end
The cycle of death will soon begin
A hole is dug; my body thrown in
Never to walk the Earth again
This feeling that I once did crave
Brought upon by an emotional wave
And now the only way my memory is saved
Is by an upsidedown cross atop my grave

(not mine)

04-09-2005, 12:21 PM
Confessions Of An Admirer
I don`t know how to prove to you
that what I have said is real
I fear opening up and explaining
all the things I think and feel
I know confessing means I stand a chance
silence will only drive you away
I must take the risk with you
and the truth is what I need to say
I want to taste every inch of you
with the silence of my fingertips
to explore your entire body tenderly
and finish at your perfect lips
I could sing the praises of your form
your chin-your hands-your touch
I get lost so easily in your embrace
I have never wanted anyone so much
if you ever start to question
what I think and feel for you
just turn to look into my eyes
and you will know it`s true

Punky Dudess
04-09-2005, 12:32 PM
when the reepers' cry sweeps o'er the moor,
just know the danger you are heading for,
should one small child stray from the path,
doomed to fall to the strangers grasp,
so when you harken the reepers' laugh,
be very sure to stay on the path.

- random poetry book.

04-09-2005, 12:51 PM
The sunrise fills your eyes.
Cannot hear your cries.
Pleading, please just go away.
I can't take another day of this.
No surprise.
A surplus of lies freed from the skies.
Is there something that I missed?
Can't even take another day of this.
Lower than piss.
Have you ever felt like this?
She can't recall the last time she avoided it.
Lower than piss.
Have you ever felt like this?
Judging by your eyes, like crystal balls...
madam me is predicting that your answer will be yes.
The sunrise burned out your eyes.
Failed to apologize as it was eating at your face.
Took your smile away without a trace of it.
Warmer than piss.
Have you ever felt like this?
It just might take a fever to encounter it.
Knee deep in shit.
There's no avoiding it.
From your knees, you're coated brown, to your toes.
There is no sound like this.
And I will keep you warm in hell.
And I will keep you warm in hell.
And I will keep you warm in hell.
Way down in hell

oh shit thats an alkaline trio song :mad:

04-09-2005, 01:06 PM
Tuck Me In

Tuck me into where it's freezing.
Tuck me into bed with snakes.
Tuck me in with the tarantulas.
I wanna let 'em in my mouth and down my throat to lay their eggs.
Tuck me into where there's bleeding.
Where it spills out of the walls onto the floor.
Tuck me into where your best friend's apologies amount to shit...
they always did for ever more.
I pour out onto the floor like liquid white from fallen glass...
nothing to cry over.
My skin went sour long ago.
It knew it had no place left to go.
Tuck me into where I'm falling.
Where I can feel the heat rise underneath my wings.
And all the fallen angels in hell will tuck me away from you.
Take me away from everything.
Tuck me into where there's dying.
Tuck me in with flames and tuck me in with flies.
Maybe then you will appreciate your only friend with maggots in her eyes,
or as ashes in the sky.
I pour out onto the floor like liquid white from fallen glass...
nothing to cry over.
My skin went sour long ago.
It knew it had no place left to go.
I pour out onto the floor like liquid white from fallen glass...
nothing to cry over.
My skin went sour long ago.
It knew it had no place left to go.

goddamnit i did it again!!!! :mad: :mad: :mad:

04-12-2005, 12:03 PM
My Hate Letter(In The Book)
this is my letter, my confession to you
telling you how I feel I`ve been wronged
by harsh actions I couldn`t control
when I thought I had really belonged
it seemed so perfect on the outside
I assumed it had been going well
but it was dyig before my eyes
beneath the safety of it`s shell
it could have been a lot of things
and it could have been the lies
it could have been our differences
and our complete lack of ties
I never said I understood it
it began as though I was dreaming
just the very thought of it
and my mind was frantically teeming
I knew not what you had felt
this you chose not to reveal
when I asked, you had locked up
it was so very hard to deal
then you played your pretty words
to the audience of my ears
you were well rehersed, I admit
you moved me into tears
it has ended and I`m not upset
as I move virtually emotionless
past the object that has brought no anger
I have already taken up the mess

04-12-2005, 12:27 PM
With Bleary Eyes I Look At You

With bleary eyes I look at you
face sore from salty tears
the face of youth I need to have
I`ve seen you this way for years
a rose can say what words cannot
it`s a cloak of sweet romance
it`s amazing how just one red rose
can make a heart twirl in sprightful dance
the perfume of you hangs in heavy silence
the thought of you is oppressive and it`s hard to deal
the world around me is full of silver
there`s no trace or suggestion of what`s real
a chronic feeling in the back of my throat
a society of words so hard to swallow
cowering in this dark quiet to shroud
sentances of nothingness make me feel so hollow
raindrops pat to the beat of my heart
assembled with the song of the sparrow
drifting and floating in consciousness
with white noise so narrow
the reeds of yesterdays rapture
as i whithered and crumbled
moisture and warmth stolen from my bones
a toy to the world to be tossed and tumbled
torn in two by creed and indifference
picking up the pieces from off the ground
turn to shadow within the fire
watching doves falling from all around
my world is dying with you not in it
daisies with their golden tops
to shrivel and lose all life
soul dancing round until it stops
the richness of every day
caught a glimpse of your dawn
all the infinite sunshine
angels rest their heads upon
your essence I can`t escape
whimsical curiosity overbears
take flight to the depths of nowhere
and the conjuring whispers within the stairs
this is how I look at you
to let all the candleflame suggest
your earthly form, impregnable to me
shift the stone for a secure rest
a costant longing I can`t repeal
how I can imagine you like this
to be there in a way I can`t explain
to wrap you up so lightly in a giggle and a kiss
to see you before me in a halo of chatter
between the hot and neverending humming
the dryness of my maiden mouth
my tender heart constantly drumming
to see your smile bow and bend
waivering so gently like the sea
to look into the dark abyss of your eyes
only to find a fairyland made just for me
a doleful land cast far forward
to drown itself in agony and dispair
is the way my lonely soul would feel
knowing you weren`t around to harbor it and to care
how radient the morning sings to me
begging me to awaken to the new day
to dance with the dew on the trees
sparkling graffiti the sun shows on its way
distance between your soul and mine
orchards of hope to call ours forever
unfolding the moon so slowly
spread between the pause together
color illuminating moths abroad
because your rainbow is never dreary
I`d wind you up in a golden cloth
to keep you from ever falling weary
tigers so ravenous here
they roar and call your name
a mad jungle of bleakness and worry
without you things won`t be the same
so with bleary eyes I look at you
face sore from salty tears
the face of youth I need to have
I`ve seen you this way for years

The Goth Guy
04-12-2005, 03:30 PM

Little cut of rage and pain
When will we ever reign?
When will we fuck,and fight,and bleed?
What the fuck do we really need?
How come I never fucked a girl t'ill I was 16?
Why must we pay for the thoughts of others as our own?
Why the fuck does my girlfriend moan?
When will we ever lead the fight to kill with steeds?
The questions we dream about when we are big and stout
Little lady in my head why the fuck won't you lay me to bed?
My head has gone heavy my eyes have gone weak
My back is hurting my shoes feel too tight
When will you join the fight?
When will it be our night?
When red roses will fall apon the feet of ones we love
And we see the whitest dove will fly apon a crystal sky
Of gold and silver I make your jewels
While the village lays in pools
And when our day is over,when our war is done
We shall reign in blood and fuck and fight
Tonight is the night