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    Undertow (Swim Away)

    Hello, these are some lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets.

    Undertow (Swim Away)

    You carved out my heart
    But I sharpened the knife
    Betrayal turned into control
    When you begged for...
  2. Thread: Denial

    by jabble524
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    Denial

    These are lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets. If anyone has time, I would love feedback.

    Denial

    I feel the catís claws, digging into my tongue
    When my reflection, asks who I am
    I...
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    Shedding Schisms Shedding skin at sunset I...

    Shedding Schisms

    Shedding skin at sunset
    I succumb to my subconscious
    And sell my soul to stimulate
    Sullen and subdued senses

    Savoring sensations, as I spiral
    Into a sea of self-loathing...
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    Phantoms

    Phantoms

    Saw myself reflected in you
    Thought I could stop my pain
    By being your tourniquet

    Tried so hard, to keep our cravings
    From carving their way into consciousness
    But they severed our...
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    Thanks a lot! But now I'm thinking, my lyrics...

    Thanks a lot! But now I'm thinking, my lyrics sound sorta emo. I don't like this fact :/ I will try to write more positive songs in the future.

    Yeah, just keep trying to expand your horizons as a...
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    Nine Lives

    Nine Lives

    Sullen eyes, stung by the sunrise
    Crestfallen lovers, under ominous skies
    We lost our immortality today
    Nine lives withered, and faded away

    Precious memories of passion and...
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    You are a good lyricist.

    You are a good lyricist.
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    Very nice. I like both the reflective and bitter...

    Very nice. I like both the reflective and bitter emotions in these lyrics.
  9. Thread: Awake

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    Thanks a lot, I appreciate you taking the time to...

    Thanks a lot, I appreciate you taking the time to read and offer feedback.
  10. Thread: Awake

    by jabble524
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    Awake

    These are some lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets.

    Awake

    As I approach the portal, between consciousness and sleep
    I smell the romantic aroma of peach mango scented candles
    The...
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    Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.

    Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.
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    Atrophy to Ashes

    Hello, these are lyrics I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets. If anyone has time I would love feedback.

    1) Atrophy to Ashes

    At first we could barely keep our hands off each other
    But time...
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    Kiss the Rattlesnake

    These are lyrics that I wrote for my band Frostbitten Sunsets. If anyone has time, I would love feedback. Hope all is well.
    -Jason

    1) Kiss the Rattlesnake

    The perilous path to paradise...
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    www.myspace.com/jabble524

    This is a link to my myspace page. www.myspace.com/jabble524
    If anyone wants to be friends, I just ask that you're 18+. Hope all is well.
    - Jason
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    Thirteen Tigers Walk up to the gate in the...

    Thirteen Tigers

    Walk up to the gate in the ancient wilderness
    Seven cobras guard the sacred waterfall
    Cross the wooden bridge to the mystic portal
    Thirteen tigers guard the passage between...
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    Second Circle Romance

    Hello, these are lyrics to six songs I wrote for my band. If anyone has time, I would love feedback. Hope all is well.
    - Jason

    1) Heavenly Hypocrisy

    To deny someone love is a cruel torture...
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    Sinister Aristocrats

    Hello, these are some lyrics I wrote for my band. If anyone has time, I would love feedback. Hope all is well, Jason.

    Sinister Aristocrats

    At what point do capitalism and corruption...
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