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    Hey, I got my own music myspace where I post guitar riffs and lyrics that I wrote. I hope to start a band, but thats in the near future. I just want to hear some feedback from other people. What would you think I need to work on, you know?

    http://myspace.com/thenoose0621

    Thanks in advance.
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    Hehe, for how long do you play guitar?
    Also, I feel that you should get Davey Havok to do vocals for Against All Reason.
    And a certain song has a definite Dirty Magic vibe fo sho .
    Before you speak think about what you're trying to say.
    Who else is there to blame for miscommunication?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Free? View Post
    Hehe, for how long do you play guitar?
    Also, I feel that you should get Davey Havok to do vocals for Against All Reason.
    And a certain song has a definite Dirty Magic vibe fo sho .
    I would guess that song is Sweet Dreams. Yeah, I have no idea what was going through my mind when I wrote.

    I've been playing seriously for about a year. I've got power chords down pretty well, and I am working on Ska/reggae stuff and soloing.

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    Hey, I posted some new stuff. I used a different method of recording. In the previous riffs, I had some of my strumming bleeding into the mike, so I fixed that by hanging the mike around my guitar stand and putting in front of my amp a few feet away.

    Also, I changed my strings. Went from SIT string to Ernie Ball, so it my sounds different in areas.

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    Hey, just posted some new stuff on my music myspace. No Tomorrow, The Cavalry, and Saint Mary are stuff I've been working on for a while. Check it out and leave a comment. I like other's opinions.

    And hey, add me if you'd like.

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    i hate the intro on hail mary but i LOVE the rest
    like free said it has a dirty magic vide to it and it's this part
    e||-----------------------------------------------------------|
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    G||--7\9--9-9\7\9--9-9---------------------------------------
    D||--7\9--9-9\7\9--9-9---555\-777---------------------------------
    A||--5\7--7-7\5\7--7-7---555\-777---------------------------------
    E||-----------------------333\-555-------------------------------
    i like the other stuf too

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    Yeah, that Offspring early stuff is a big inspiration on me musically.

    Really, you didn't like the intro to Saint Mary. A lot of people like it. I've received lots of praise for it.

    And that song is called Sweet Dreams. I wrote lyrics to it and I'm still trying to figure out how it's going to work.

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    yeah i didnt like it
    i love the rest of hail mary specialy the scratches
    i would love to hear more of sweet dreams. and also the finished version of it

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    It wont happen until I get new, 150 watt amp, a bass player and a drummer.

    Right now, I need a job. None of the stuff I want to happen wont happen until I get a steady income.

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    maybe sell ur things or ask for donations

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