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    Hello,

    I would like to present you " One Less To Go".

    You can check out our first song on our youtube chanel www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

    Our first song is called "before it slips away" and it's about how it's important to seize your life and fully live it.

    I would like to know what do you think about the music, what could be improved etc.
    Since we are french speaking people from belgium, I would like to know if the pronunciation is ok.

    We've recorded 4 song, and they will be released during this week so stay tuned.

    Thanks.


    ps: here is a direct link to the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V903HDO7mK8

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    Hi ,

    We are still waiting for comments so really do not hesitate even if you don't like it.

    You can listen to our second son which is " thousand miles to the moon"

    I even wrote the lyrics as an acrostic, so I would like to have your comments about the text knowing that i'm not an english native speaker.

    http://www.youtube.com/onelesstogo#p/u/6/stVoVq44KHg here is the link to our new song

    or you can get through www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

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    1000 Miles to the Moon is great! The guitar is very well-played throughout the whole song, and the melody is nice. Is that one the acrostic? I couldn't really hear the lyrics, but it didn't sound like one. Anyway, post the lyrics and we'll see. I wrote an acrostic years ago, but it wasn't nearly as good as yours!

    I also liked Before it Slips Away. I'm wondering, how's the music scene where you live? Do you get to play many shows?
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    seize the moment is punk as fuck. didnt really like 1000 miles to the moon
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    Thanks for the comment

    Tired of this mindset
    Hasty, he wants to forget
    Out there he wishes to be
    Unchained he long to be
    Suddenly living this place
    Asking for an outer space
    Never really free
    Dsappearing feeling the glee

    Miles after miles
    Inside he shines
    Lightened and releaved now
    Escaping his dead end life
    Sorrow's left behind

    To the moon he goes
    Out there it glows

    T
    H
    E

    Melancholy is pouring in
    Oh Now he is leaving
    On a sign less track
    Never looking back

    Actually it is not a perfect acrostic because the "the" didn't fit in the song. I mean we didn't find out how to sing the lyrics I wrote properly. And It's not a perfect acrostic because I have added "tomorrow is not an other day meaning of life he reaches/ he seizes"

    And we didn't get to play any shows yet, we wanted to record some songs before looking for shows, it's much easier that way.

    The two other songs we've recorded are going to be released this week end on our youtube chanel.

    www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

    One of the song is called demon at the door and it sounds a little bit like the smashing pumpkins, and the other one is called living in this and it's hard to define the sound
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    Quote Originally Posted by OneLessToGo View Post
    Hello,

    I would like to present you " One Less To Go".

    You can check out our first song on our youtube chanel www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

    Our first song is called "before it slips away" and it's about how it's important to seize your life and fully live it.

    I would like to know what do you think about the music, what could be improved etc.
    Since we are french speaking people from belgium, I would like to know if the pronunciation is ok.

    We've recorded 4 song, and they will be released during this week so stay tuned.

    Thanks.


    ps: here is a direct link to the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V903HDO7mK8
    Hey, Before It Slips Away is a nice song! I like the punk-rockish energy mixed with different elements that make it pretty distinctive. About the pronunciation: One is able to hear the French accent, but the pronunciation is ok, and the accent makes your music even more unique.
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    Thanks again for the comment.

    Our next song will be released on youtube tomorrow.

    Hope you'll like it too

    www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

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    Here I am again.

    I come to announce that our third song is available on our youtube chanel

    www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

    Hope you'l like the song, about the sound of the music well it sound a little bit like the smashing pumpkins in the sens that there are heavy guitar riffs with a clean voice but you are the only judge.

    To answer an other question about music in belgium ( where we live) well it's a dead place, at least in the south part of belgium, the north is a bit more evolved but still everything is still to be done here

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    Here it is

    The last but not the least, "Living in this" our lastest song is on our youtube channel

    www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

    Or you can go directly through
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IEyLzCzDWSQ

    Again feel free to comment our songs, lyrics and music

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    Here we are again,

    But this time with a cover song " when a man loves a woman"

    Hope you'll like our version

    www.youtube.com/onelesstogo

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