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    Default I actually like Cruisin' California.

    I am an amateur filmmaker. Here is my attempt at a music video. Thanks for watching, give me your feedback, it means a lot to me.



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    I don't like giving feedback, because you almost can't do it without making it sound really negative, but here goes:

    Make your cuts follow the music. I only noticed you doing this around 2:40 when the song slowed down (Caaliforniaaa...), but this is something you need to be doing much more often when doing a music video. Also, because it's a relatively up-beat song, you need to make more frantic and rapid cuts as well to reflect that. I also noticed a few clips that seemed to be leftovers of an editing process (clips that showed up for a small fraction of a second, just to disappear before you could realize what it was).

    I hope you don't take it too harshly, I think it's cool you made this video, even though it may be a bit too personal for me to really enjoy.

    Keep workin', and keep cruisin'!

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    Yeah, I know you mean about trying to sync the video with the music but it's really hard to do. I appreciate you watching it though, it means a lot to me... it's damn near impossible to get anyone outside your family to watch your stuff let a lot critique it! Thanks for the tips. I will continue ah- cruisin'!

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    Don't give a fuck
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    I liked it very much!

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    THAT is a video I'd like to be in. Looks like fun times!
    The Meaning Of Life would be a great song for this video too. Keep it up, i enjoyed it
    whoah whoah woah- next offspring song

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    It keeps stopping to buffer for me, but I think you did very well. Nice clips.
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